I enjoy how you do it in the last months, heavily focused on Newcastle. But on the other hand the multiple club style is what makes the story interesting. I would suggest that for every Newcastle article (like commentary of the month) you add one article for one other team (keep all 6 of theme)...
You probably mean Liverpool, not Everton? And why are Holloway and Jol jobs insecure? They are doing pretty well.
And most important thing: you and you'r story are finnaly back(H)
I think your story is amazing. Because one important reason, I read it like a story about a league(EPL) not a story about your(or your club) achievements and it's really original. You mayn't get as much response as you like, but I think it would be bad if you change your approach to this story...