This is a very big question. I think you should look around the net for some basic FM guides, not only FM16. even as old as FM 12 or Fm 13 can help you in this regard. (FM is always built around same principle, AKA real life football)
Anyway, I will try to give you some tips here:
1) Playing...
My view
Just want to share my 2 cents.
I know this is a discussion on tatics.
but FM is more than that. You need the right players. Right morale level. Right training. Right OI (this is more tactics based)
Team need to be used to your tactics.
Team need to trust you as a manager. (depends...
analysis
First thing when I go through your tatics, You are playing very narrow formation (with MCR/MCL. STCR/STCL, so now wingers). Very defensive role in the middle too. (half back, B2B, BWM) This means you have no creator in the center of your team.
Second thing which stands out to me, is...