If actually put effort in then the story will be accepted. The mods are just doing their job, people don't want the site clogged up by utter *****. If you put the effort in it will be accepted and people will read it.
You only posted it 45 minutes ago. It's the middle of a week day. Chances are the Story Moderators are either at work/school/eating lunch. Have some patience.
*edit* - It appears you've posted the exact same story four times now, without improving it.