Not the best of OP's but I am sure that if you follow some of the guides that have been stickied in the FM Stories section,you'll be able to make a better one..not with Real Madrid.
This isn't exactly epic mate, seems like the writing of a 10 year old. Try and look at the guides and if the story improves definately ask the mods to change the name. Just curious lads, how did this get approved???
seriously epic fail mate, please read the stickies in the stories section to get the just of starting a story please! http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/