My New Song!!!

[The Shots]

Guys, this is my new song, that I made, I would like feedback, to see if I should release this one.

By the way i'm only 12!​

YouTube- Profesional Beat on FL Studio 9

 

[Bodell]

If you're only 12 mate then nice song !

 

[westham1995]

Very good - you could always expand it at a later date to include more varied lyrics!

 

[The Shots]

If you're only 12 mate then nice song !

Thanks! =D

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Very good - you could always expand it at a later date to include more varied lyrics!

might?
I dunno

 

[Max]

It's good if you're 12, although it's a bit repetitive, so maybe some more lyrics or a few different beats in it would make it better, but then I'm no expert.

 

[The Shots]

It's good if you're 12, although it's a bit repetitive, so maybe some more lyrics or a few different beats in it would make it better, but then I'm no expert.

Thanks, I was bored so I made it.

 

[The Shots]

It's not very good.

But some of my other one's are.

 

[Anthony]

It's great that you have the interest at a young age and I wish you success but just remember that you are using generic samples that will always sound amateurish.
It's not chart quality unfortunately.

 

[The Shots]

It's great that you have the interest at a young age and I wish you success but just remember that you are using generic samples that will always sound amateurish.
It's not chart quality unfortunately.

I know, but in a few years maybe I will be better.