My Story - Gameplay/Commentary

[TheShadowStrike]

Hey guys i have been using this website since around 2009 and its great, and i've loved reading loads of the stories uploaded by various gamers. i was just wondering if you guys could help me, i've started doing a gameplay commentary of my own story and was hoping some of you guys could check it out. feedback would be greatly appreciated positive or negative. please like favourite and subscribe to help my channel grow, thanks
YouTube - My Story | Episode 1 - Football Manager 2011 Gameplay/Commentary