Super story for Super Man Utd

[Tobe2k10]

Hey guys can you see how I can improve this story Im trying to make an ultimate story for the ultimate squad. But want to see how I can improve it.

Thanx and I appreciate anyone who comments.

http://www.filefront.com/15306993/undefined

 

[Jack Fulham]

I don't get it, download a story ?

 

[Tobe2k10]

its only on Word processor. Im just doing it on there for now.

 

[Jack Fulham]

Fair enough, I might take a look at it tomorrow morning

 

[Tobe2k10]

cheers thanx. hope others have a look