Tulio's Amazing Career

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This a thread were I will post my FM Story> Hope you like it. COmment and tell me where I should I improve in game and in the thread thanks. Bdw I will begin with Liverpool. I selected these leagues:

England - Coca Cola 2
Italy - Serie B
Spain - Liga Adelante
Germany - 2nd Bundesliga
France - National
Holland - 2nd Tier.



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It all began in 16th June when Hicks decided to sell the club following series of death threats. The fans were happy but than stopped to be happy as the FA announced that the club could go to administration if they don't reduce debt at least to -100 from -150. So they decided to do their first alternative reducing the wages, the players accepted but Sammy Lee, Mauricio Pellegrini and Rafa Benitez rejected, so they started to find a new manager. In 30 June 2009 Benitez left by mutual consent, the club moved quickly to appoint rookie Maltese manager as an interim manager. Tulio signed a 1 year contract for 9m. He said that it is every manager dream to manage this club.
 
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Fantastic OP to get readers gripped. Absolutely immense. I rate you man!
 
what happened to CONSTRUCTIVE criticism give him a break he is new
 
I haven't done anything to him, and I said it was a good OP, don't see why I need an infraction?
 
Good luck mate, hope you do well, but I would give THIS a read, get you on the right track for writing stories:). Also, look at the other stories that are getting multiple pages and replies to see how you can improve.
 
I was actually being nice, seriously? Why did I get an infraction?

He had a good OP and lots of info?
 
Pre-Season ​

Transfers

Tulio was very active in the transfers this Pre-Season by buying Luis Suarez from Ajax for 22m, Landry Cisse for free from Sachaux with a 1.6 compensation after failing to sign Marc Muniesa and Marco Verratti for 650k from Pescara. He had to sell to make room for them he sold Javier Masherano to Chelsea for a club record 35m to rivals Chelsea, Dossena to Sunderland for 15m, Albert Riera to Real Madrid for 18m, N'Gog to Bordeaux for 6,250,000m and Degen to Palermo for a surprise 5m fee.

Fans View: Good Buys but they would give chance to Riera and Dossena. They wouldn't sell Mascherano to Chelsea.

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Matches

It was a good Pre-Season for Liverpool FC in terms of matches winning 9 and losing 1. They started their campaign with their new manager Vs the reserve side of Liverpool. Liverpool won them by 5-1. Following was a lost vs Lech of 4-2. Then they won 8 consecutive matches 3-2 vs West Brom, 2-1 Vs Charleroi (Cup Semi Final), 2-1 vs CSKA Sofia (Cup Final), 6-0 Vs Aberdeen, 2-1 Vs Southend, 3-1 Vs Walsall and a 3-0 Vs Pescara. In the Germany Tour they beat Holzikwedge for 9-0.

Fans View: They feel that they should had scored more and conceded less but happy with the run.

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Overall they had a good Pre-Season after all he is just an interim manager.

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August​

It Wasn't a great start to their league campaign as they won just one from three. Their first game was vs Portsmouth were their absolutely dominated but their outcome was only a 1-1 draw. Luis Suarez scored Liverpool FC first goal of their 2009-2010 league campaign. 4 days after they managed to win Wigan for 2-0 goals from Voronin and Torres. They organised a cup to develop young players in great playes and won 3 from 3 league matches 2-0, 2-1 and 5-1. Recently in this month Tulio had a bust-up with Reina but Reina excused and Tulio accpeted his excuse.

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Hi Mates I thank all for watching and commenting. There will be some changes. Here is an example this is ONLY AN EXAMPLE IT ISNT TRUE.

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December

Events

UEFA CHampions League Draw - Infosasdsdajdaida

Matches

H Vs Everton 4-0 - sidasduadsadasdasfafafasfafafa

Transfers

In

Out

Hope you will like the new format there will be screenshots aswell and more pics.

Again thanks for reading.
 
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Give him a break it is his first story; good luck by the way!
 
Hi Mates by mistake I deleted the game (the save). I will start another one so I will start another thread. Is this against the rules ?.
 
umm nope but you have to get a mod to delete this Thread,


Another tip by the way is that not many people will like it if you keep starting stories and then saying you accidentally deleted them etc. plus you will get a bad reputation so make sure this is your last one eh:)
 
make sure you read all the tips and suggestions revolving around making stories, if its not attractive or well laid out and written, no one is going to waste their time reading, you need to make it as best as you can so that people can see the effort you are putting in and hopefully will follow it...

also, alacraz is correct, not sure exactly how you can just delete a game, i have never been able to do that my whole Fm playing career without wanting too... so dont do it again, read stories like Dans: Hammertime and Cockfosters and other great ones to get a feel for everything and decide on how you are going to lay yours out and stick to it, ask for recommendations on how to improve, get people involved, ask for feedback or signings etc :wub:
 
you could PM one, but none are online right now
 
Thanks Nick Main. I contacted one and will deleted it. Hope You like my new thread I will started right now.
 
omg, you sold Masch? That really surprise me! Hmm who did you sign? No backup for DM other than Lucas?
 
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