Aberdeen, Bringing back the Glory

[arca-33]

October

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After two consecutive wins the Dons continue an impressive undefeated streak after loosing there first match.
What a match a brilliant 6-3 victory sure to lift morale in the dons camp.
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Winning streak continues for the next two matches
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Brandy proves his worth by winning young player of the month.
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[toddzy]

Mate its not a critiscism just advice, storys arn't just a screenshot, you need to go more in depth. I like the idea of Aberdeen, have a look at eds-99 story or i'd also advise carine's bayern story as he is a good writer. You don't have to copy the style etc, just see how much depth they go into when writing a story. Hope this helps, bud good luck

 

[flamindamon]

Try centering your writing and pictures, see if it looks better

 

[jthamrun]

Good luck mate

 

[Clark_Messi]

I'm starting to like the story.
I'll popp in from time to time.
You've made a great start and Febian Brandy will be top class for you.
Keep going