G GeordieRichee Member Joined Mar 25, 2010 Messages 292 Reaction score 0 Points 0 Jul 25, 2010 #1 Delete please Last edited: Jul 25, 2010
T toddzy Member Joined Jun 14, 2009 Messages 2,636 Reaction score 0 Points 36 Jul 25, 2010 #2 Mate you need to put abit more into your OP, not really enough in it to call it a story :S
M miggo97 Member Joined Aug 20, 2009 Messages 553 Reaction score 0 Points 16 Jul 25, 2010 #3 if this is your first story its ok but try to add a better layout, use qoutes when someone is sayin somet like player, new signing
if this is your first story its ok but try to add a better layout, use qoutes when someone is sayin somet like player, new signing
L LGFIRE Member Joined May 15, 2009 Messages 1,304 Reaction score 0 Points 0 Jul 25, 2010 #4 Tips and Hint on how to make your FM story better: http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/t...ry-t29284.html Making stories better: http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/f...ce-t22083.html noticed your new so heres something you could check out to help you out making the story better, also check out my templates
Tips and Hint on how to make your FM story better: http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/t...ry-t29284.html Making stories better: http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/f...ce-t22083.html noticed your new so heres something you could check out to help you out making the story better, also check out my templates