Trophy_Whorder
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how do you get cockfoster on fm can some one send me a link and one that works
how do you get cockfoster on fm can some one send me a link and one that works
I feel I have been visually raped from reading through all of that, pained my eyes but given the hype I thought I would give it a read.
Firstly I would like to congratulate you on your commitment to the game/story. You have the patience I lack when it comes to fm.
However this was the biggest eyesore of a story I have ever came across, most of the 36 pages are your own posts, with all different fonts, sizes, colours and pictures.
The spelling and grammar is an abomination at times. I advise looking into the bellow stories. They involve pictures etc which seems to be what you are going for, the lay out is a lot neater, easier to read and the writing is decent.
Please don’t take this as an insult, I just feel it overshadows the achievements you have accomplished.
http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/watford-football-club-years-of-anguish-it-ends-now-t34447.html Max Watford Story
http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/doing-the-impossible-replacing-wenger-t34342.html
Frankie's Arsenal Story.
I feel I have been visually raped from reading through all of that, pained my eyes but given the hype I thought I would give it a read.
Firstly I would like to congratulate you on your commitment to the game/story. You have the patience I lack when it comes to fm.
However this was the biggest eyesore of a story I have ever came across, most of the 36 pages are your own posts, with all different fonts, sizes, colours and pictures.
The spelling and grammar is an abomination at times. I advise looking into the bellow stories. They involve pictures etc which seems to be what you are going for, the lay out is a lot neater, easier to read and the writing is decent.
Please don’t take this as an insult, I just feel it overshadows the achievements you have accomplished.
http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/watford-football-club-years-of-anguish-it-ends-now-t34447.html Max Watford Story
http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/doing-the-impossible-replacing-wenger-t34342.html
Frankie's Arsenal Story.
I feel I have been visually raped from reading through all of that, pained my eyes but given the hype I thought I would give it a read.
Firstly I would like to congratulate you on your commitment to the game/story. You have the patience I lack when it comes to fm.
However this was the biggest eyesore of a story I have ever came across, most of the 36 pages are your own posts, with all different fonts, sizes, colours and pictures.
The spelling and grammar is an abomination at times. I advise looking into the bellow stories. They involve pictures etc which seems to be what you are going for, the lay out is a lot neater, easier to read and the writing is decent.
Please don’t take this as an insult, I just feel it overshadows the achievements you have accomplished.
http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/watford-football-club-years-of-anguish-it-ends-now-t34447.html Max Watford Story
http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/doing-the-impossible-replacing-wenger-t34342.html
Frankie's Arsenal Story.
Wow chelsea bottom of table lol they must have **** team haha :d