R rok17 Member Joined Aug 30, 2009 Messages 166 Reaction score 0 Points 0 May 1, 2010 #1 I'll be starting a story with Fulham. Hope you follow,
J Joneesy CHAMPI2NS Joined Dec 29, 2009 Messages 2,002 Reaction score 0 Points 36 May 1, 2010 #2 Is that your OP?
B Bodell Member Joined Nov 14, 2009 Messages 2,373 Reaction score 0 Points 0 May 1, 2010 #3 are you writing abit more about your story or are you just keeping it like that ?oO)
C Chris Who needs Ba; we got Best Joined Jun 17, 2009 Messages 5,759 Reaction score 0 Points 0 May 1, 2010 #4 Take a look at these: http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/fm10-story-advice-t22083.html http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/tips-hints-and-links-to-make-a-better-fm-story-t29284.html http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/fm-base-story-rules-t28713.html http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/a-story-is-not-just-showing-us-screenshots-of-your-t28997.html
Take a look at these: http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/fm10-story-advice-t22083.html http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/tips-hints-and-links-to-make-a-better-fm-story-t29284.html http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/fm-base-story-rules-t28713.html http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/f81/a-story-is-not-just-showing-us-screenshots-of-your-t28997.html
M Max Member Joined Apr 14, 2009 Messages 10,057 Reaction score 0 Points 0 May 1, 2010 #5 This is not good enough for a story tbh mate, sorry. Please take a look at the links Chris posted and try and improve it, because that isn't enough detail for a story.
This is not good enough for a story tbh mate, sorry. Please take a look at the links Chris posted and try and improve it, because that isn't enough detail for a story.