Sorry, but this is woeful.
It's clear it's confusing people, and the posts aren't entertaining at all, it's some big bold title text, then a picture then a block of text..
Give the guy a chance this could become a great story. just give him some advice instead of criticising. PS i like the story so far its different
Dont stop your story dont listen to the idiots on this webiste your gona always get someCheers anyway pal.
I appreciate the comments but I will put this story on hold because I've got something else planned. This story will be back in a week or two but for now I'm going to play a season on another save so I can post monthly installments.Dont stop your story dont listen to the idiots on this webiste your gona always get some