Liverpool FC : Back to Glory

[bigwill1xx]

Breaking news from the Liverpool camp Kenny dalglish has been sacked as Liverpool manager. The Liverpool board claims Kenny did not meet expectations by only finishing 6th​ and not making Europe. There is much speculation on who will take the position but rumors suggest that Jose Mourinho may take the position.

It has been 2 weeks since the dismissal of Kenny dalglish as Liverpool manager And the Liverpool chairman has scheduled a press conference and the speculation is that Liverpool will appoint a new manager.

1 day before the press conference Former England Superstar player Will Brooks in his estimated 1.5 billion Pound mansion. As the sun went down on july 5th​ 2011 Brooks received a call from a Liverpool representative at first I figured that it was a special appearance they wanted considering they are a former club of mine little did I know they had told me there deal with jose mourinho had fallen through and they had to announce a new manger tomorrow so before I could comprehend it I was manager of Liverpool.

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hey guys will be doing monthly updates i will do the preseason and 1st month in next update

 

[bigwill1xx]

BREAKING NEWS
Liverpool have just completed the signing of German international Lukas Podolski for a reported sum of 25m Brooks had this to say “Lukas is a great player and I think he can make the difference this year.”
With Liverpool first premiership game coming up against Chelsea brooks certainly hopes to get a win. In other news Arsenal sign Sergio busquets from barcalona for a reported sum15m View attachment 235527

 

[bigwill1xx]

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[bigwill1xx]

Monthly Update: August

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2 - Liverpool vs Chelsea - 0
Anfield August 13th
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Goals : Carrol 19th Carragher 22nd
Man of the match : Carragher 1 goal 1 assist
Managers opinion : pure ******* class great result

0 - Newcastle VS Liverpool - 3
St James Park
August 20th

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Skrtel (19)

Suarez (59) Carrol (77)
Man of the match - Skrtel
Managers Opinion - another great result hopefully we can keep this form up.
Carling cup round 2
0 -Southampton VS Liverpool-1
St Mary's Stadium
August 24th
Goals - Podolski ​

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Man of the match - Podolski
Managers Opinion - A win is a win but would have liked a larger victory

Merseyside Derby
2 - Everton VS Liverpool - 4
Anfield
August 27th
Goals - Kuyt (17, 63) ​

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Suarez (28)
Coates (51)
Man of the match - Charlie Adam 3 assists
Managers opinion - Adam is a beast always nice to pick up a win in the derby.


Monthly Opinion - undefeated well done to the lads lets keep this up
Liverpool player of the month : Reina 2 goals allowed out of 4 games and one of them was a own goal so yea hes been on form this month.
League Table : ​

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Hey guys leave feedback tell me how im doing (1st time trying a story) and hope you have fun reading
PS : next update 2morrow

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[messithegreatest]

You need to improve in your layout mate..

 

[bigwill1xx]

Monthly Update
September

2 - Liverpool VS Swansea - 1
September 10th
The Liberty Stadium

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Goals - Coates (49)
Podolski (72)
Man of the match : Charlie adam 2 assits
Press conference : Reporter - Mr.Brooks the boys have been on form why do you think that is?
Brooks : Are you ******* daft? there on form because this is the level of play you can excpect from us No more questions.

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2 - Liverpool VS Wolves - 0
September 17th
Anfield

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Goals - Skrtel (23)
Bellamy (86)
Man of the match : Bellamy 1 assist 1 goal
Press Conference : Reporter : The Boys have been....
Brooks : NOW HOLD ON JUST A SECOND YOU ASKED ME THE SAME EXACT QUESTION LAST TIME SO **** OFF. no further questions.

The FA - Mr.Brooks your actions were out of line therefore you are being suspended for Liverpool's carling cup match against blackburn. Sincerley The FA.

Brooks - GOD ******* dammit **** those ***** I need a drink.
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Carling Cup 3rd round (suspended)
0 - Liverpool VS Blackburn - 1

September 24th

Ewood Park

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Goals : Grant Hanley (****)
Man of the match Hanley (****)
Opinion : **** those FA ***** making me watch the game on the TV **** them costing us the game.

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0 - Liverpool VS West Brom - 1

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Goals - Long (21)​
Man of the match : Long
Press Conference : Reporter : Wtf happend today?
Will Brooks : you really think i know **** you.



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thanks for reading guys i know my layouting skills suck please leave feedback so i can get better at it thanks for reading guys


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[StephenMUFC]

Bit of Advice make your Headlines a bit smaller and centre the writing. Other than that good job

 

[bigwill1xx]

thanks man 1st attempt at this whole thing

 

[Steve*]

Make all your fonts smaller. Size 2 is adequate. Just use bold for effect for headlines.
And center allign all images

 

[bigwill1xx]

thanks mate really do appreciate it

 

[bigwill1xx]

Monthly Update
October



3 - Liverpool VS Tottenham - 0
October 1st
Anfield
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Goals - Lucas (29)
Carroll (44)
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rafael van der vaart O.G (77)

Man of the Match : Lucas
Press Conference : Im not taking any questions cause ill want to punch someone in the face. it was a great result from the lads today thank you.



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4 - Liverpool VS Wigan - 1
October 15th
DW Stadium
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Goals - Gerrard (35)
Carroll (48)
Kuyt (70)
Podolski (87)

Man of the Match : Podolski

Press Conference : Reporter : Mr.brooks your first 2 months at anfield have been great what have you done to make the team preform this well?
Me: for this team the sky is the limit and we hope to go onward.




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1 - Liverpool VS Fulham - 1
October 22nd

Craven Cottage
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Goals - Carroll (65)
Man of the Match : Bryan Ruiz
Press Conference : Me: IM ******* ****** NO QUESTIONS **** OFF ALL OF YOU




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3 - Liverpool VS Sunderland - 0
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October 27th
Anfield
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Goals: Carroll (35)
Lucas (39)
Adam (48)

Man of the Match : Charlie Adam

Press Conference : Me : Well i hate all you media ***** otherwise great result great to see the boys rebound



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The Table : ​

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Hey guys thanks for reading leave suggestions trying to get better at doing this and look at the table STOKE IN 4TH ? WEST BROM IN 6TH ? and many other odd table positions





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[xdannyw92]

You need to make all of your page middle-aligned if you know what I mean. Also instead of "3 Liverpool vs Sunderland 0", maybe just "Liverpool 3-0 Sunderland". It looks a lot better and easy to read.

Also easy with the language. It's like I can't take it seriously.

Sorry to be critical but there is potential to make this a good story.

 

[Steve*]

^^ What xdannyw92 said.
Center allign everything. And there is no need for the profanity. That will turn people away straight away.
Look at my story help and advice giude at the top of the story section for useful tips and advice also dude.

 

[bigwill1xx]

Monthly Update
November



Liverpool 1-0 Blackburn
November 5th
Ewood Park
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Goals - Carroll (60)

Man of the Match - Carroll

Overview : nice win but had tons of chances we didnt finish
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Liverpool 2 - 0 Norwich
November 8th
Carrow Road

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Goals - Skrtel (34, 45)

Man of the Match : Skrtel

Overview : thank god for skrtel
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Liverpool 3-0 Stoke
November 19th
Anfield
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Goals : Carroll (63,87)
Gerrard (71 pen)

Man of the Match : Carroll

Overview : Carroll the only striker scoring oh the irony

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Liverpool 5-0 Q.P.R
November 26th
Loftus Road
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Goals : Skrtel (34,92)
Carroll (48,85)
Gerrard (37)

Overview : QUALITY SON




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Liverpool 0-0 Man City
November 30th
Anfield
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Goals : Podolski missed pen (92)



Man of the match : Hart

Overview : CMON PODOLSKI i thought Germans were good at pens




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Monthly summary
Good month all around won manager of the month should have beat man city though
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League Table
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Well you can expect more soon trying to pump out as many as i can today


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[xdannyw92]

Much better pal

 

[bigwill1xx]

lol im trying to take the tips of all the experienced pepole

 

[Steve*]

Vastly improved.

It all depends how you want the story to go now.
Some people(myself included) dont write about every game. Sometimes we show results of the games via a screenshot of fixtures and just single out 1 or 2 major games each update and write a bit about them and match events.

One thing I would encourage is to include a bit more description about the match than the scorers. Talk about missed chances, players who did praticularly well or bad, any bookings, players who had a high pass percentage. Players missing sitters etc. The more text in a story the more sucessful it does be. I would focus more on the quality of content in an update than a quantity

And if you dont mind me linking you to my story I can show you how i do things?

Not being critical of you now or anything. Its just to help get more followers.

 

[xdannyw92]

One more thing, less gaps between lines.

One is enough.

Like this

 

[bigwill1xx]

im open to anything o go ahead steve

 

[Steve*]

http://www.fm-base.co.uk/forum/foot...5-uprooting-foundations-journeyman-story.html

There you go. And also look at Raikans story(may not have been updated recently).

And my tutorial on stories is a long read but it can be quite useful for first timers and has some useful tips and tricks