good story i like how it has dialogue, do you think ronaldinho will make it to the world cup? I wonder if your team will do well if a game goes down to penalties. (haha)
I like this method of writing betterkeep it going mate its good!
Good story, and lol why did Southahmpton want you as manager? What were they expecting?
Nice tiwst mateYou'll need to get your name changed by a request from a moderator
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Nice, layout. I only just noticed this story, but good luck and I'll follow![]()
Following this, nice layout & decent story, keep up the good work mate =)
Nice update mate, keep this going you have a nice thing going here![]()
good updates again, i was so confused when i saw the title
Great story so far, when's the next update?
Tomorrow i will do 2 or 3 updates![]()