need advice

[elasticspy26]

Hi.

I dont generally ask for help on tactics, but i need some help with this one:

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can anyone give me some advice on how to improve it?

 

[apvmoreira]

Whats wrong with it?

 

[WJ]

Pairs & Combinations FM2015 - UPDATED

You need to read that. Your tactic is far, far, far too attacking.

 

[elasticspy26]

Whats wrong with it?

It's just one of those feelings, as in "I know something isn't right here, but I cant see what"


So I am asking for advice on it, to see if anyone else can "tweak" it so it feels "right" if you understand what I mean?

 

[elasticspy26]

Pairs & Combinations FM2015 - UPDATED

You need to read that. Your tactic is far, far, far too attacking.

I will deffo give that a read, thankyou