Micky Pain
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Dude, don't give up just because I tried to give you some pointers.
It's your first story, so you can't expect it to be perfect. Just go on and read a few of the highly rated stories out there and see what you like about them, and why you like it, and then try to implement these elements into your own.
Most people on here will gladly help you out if you ask them nicely.
I don't recall anyone saying "you suck" at your story, so don't take it personal when you get some pointers.
As to the topic, like Max already mentioned, there's just soooooo many Leeds stories out there, most courtesy of one very infamous forum member, that it's hard to get a following with any more Leeds stories.
And I do get that sentiment, I love playing Leeds, but my current save with a non-Leeds team is the longest run I ever had and also the most fun, so I can only encourage you to try a different one.
If you decide to kill this story, it's your call off course.
If you do want to start a new one in the future, I can only recommend that you start and take regular screens and whatnot, but only start posting the story once you're in your second season or later.
There's just too many stories that loose momentum after a few games, and once you had a few runs end even before halfway through the first season, no one will give any of your future attempts a second glance.
It's your first story, so you can't expect it to be perfect. Just go on and read a few of the highly rated stories out there and see what you like about them, and why you like it, and then try to implement these elements into your own.
Most people on here will gladly help you out if you ask them nicely.
I don't recall anyone saying "you suck" at your story, so don't take it personal when you get some pointers.
As to the topic, like Max already mentioned, there's just soooooo many Leeds stories out there, most courtesy of one very infamous forum member, that it's hard to get a following with any more Leeds stories.
And I do get that sentiment, I love playing Leeds, but my current save with a non-Leeds team is the longest run I ever had and also the most fun, so I can only encourage you to try a different one.
If you decide to kill this story, it's your call off course.
If you do want to start a new one in the future, I can only recommend that you start and take regular screens and whatnot, but only start posting the story once you're in your second season or later.
There's just too many stories that loose momentum after a few games, and once you had a few runs end even before halfway through the first season, no one will give any of your future attempts a second glance.