My Man United Story going for Quadruple first season

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do u guys think i can win all cups in my first season

  • yes

    Votes: 4 23.5%

  • no

    Votes: 13 76.5%
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this story is cringeworthy to read through, all these laugh out louds.
 
I'd better say it's more story about club named LOL than ManU, but very nice start tho. Will follow (H)
 
Barclays Premier League results AUGUST UPDATE
Manchester Utd 6 Aston Villa 3
Manchseter Utd 6Hull 0
West Ham Utd 1Manchester Utd 6
Fulham 1 Manchester Utd 4
MAN UTD TOP OF THE PREM
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Pemberton Manger of the mouth of August

what a start to the season
 
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Those results seems a tad unrealistic mate? You really beat West Ham 6-1 away oO)
 
hey guys is it ture that u can become a legend on the game lol if u can how long does it take and what do i have to do just win cups lol or is it on tactics and stuff lol (H)
 
Just win everything.

Had it on 09.
 
Can we see the line-ups for those matches please? LOL.
 
Nick Main said:
Those results seems a tad unrealistic mate? You really beat West Ham 6-1 away oO)
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yes m8

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bcfc said:
Can we see the line-ups for those matches please? LOL.
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yes

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Chris said:
Just win everything.

Had it on 09.
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yh lol ill try
 
good start - but uh - do you know how to punctuate? amd maybe can we have some variations of lol, lmao, *****, rofl etc. i'm sure you'll think of something - you seem intelligent and imaginative
 
Barclays Premier League results AUGUST UPDATE the LINE UPS
 
joss said:
good start - but uh - do you know how to punctuate? amd maybe can we have some variations of lol, lmao, *****, rofl etc. i'm sure you'll think of something - you seem intelligent and imaginative
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*****
 
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ronaseal said:
why did you sell berba and get agbolahor for more :P crazy lol
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so what

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ryangiggs11 said:
not bad start adam mate hope for all the best in ur journey
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cheers m8 wish i now how to make the story look better do lol any ideas anyone lol

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am new to fourms lol
 
erm yes, i have a couple of suggestions on how to make the story better, one of them's quite genius really.

My genius idea, well thats simple: Stop putting LOL after everything, it's so ****** annoying and makes you sound about 7!

My second idea, go into more detail rather than just showing us screenshots of games, atm, your story is just the same as everyone elses, dull and un-interesting.

Perhaps go into more detail about the games, tell us what you were happy about and what you weren't happy about, oh and while your at it, learn proper english, grammar and pronunciation

;)(K)(6)
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