My Man United Story going for Quadruple first season

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do u guys think i can win all cups in my first season

  • yes

    Votes: 4 23.5%

  • no

    Votes: 13 76.5%
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retrodude09 said:
erm yes, i have a couple of suggestions on how to make the story better, one of them's quite genius really.

My genius idea, well thats simple: Stop putting LOL after everything, it's so ****** annoying and makes you sound about 7!

My second idea, go into more detail rather than just showing us screenshots of games, atm, your story is just the same as everyone elses, dull and un-interesting.

Perhaps go into more detail about the games, tell us what you were happy about and what you weren't happy about, oh and while your at it, learn proper english, grammar and pronunciation

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lol **** u i have learning disabilities stop being so ****** mean and i have
Dysexecutive syndrome u need to learn to recpect people ok no need for it u ***
 
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Adam 24 said:
so what

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cheers m8 wish i now how to make the story look better do lol any ideas anyone lol

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am new to fourms lol
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just ad more screen shots monthly review people seem to like that player of the months manager etc all in all i think its easy to read.
 
Adam 24 said:
lol **** u i have learning disabilities stop being so ****** mean and i have
Dysexecutive syndrome u need to learn to recpect people ok no need for it u ***
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Then maybe a story isn't the way to go?
 
Adam 24 said:
lol **** u i have learning disabilities stop being so ****** mean and i have
Dy***ecutive syndrome u need to learn to recpect people ok no need for it u ***
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Just read the text in bold and underlined..lol
 
I suppose you could cheat and save before every game! Only joking, good luck mate!:)
 
lol **** u i have learning disabilities stop being so ****** mean and i have
Dysexecutive syndrome u need to learn to recpect people ok no need for it u ***


bit far adam mate some might take it as a joke but some might not no need for that tho any way when ur next update
 
hey leave adam24 alone, don't comment if you don't have anything good to say. Good luck Adam 24, your thread is great so far!:)
 
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ryangiggs11 said:
lol **** u i have learning disabilities stop being so ****** mean and i have
Dysexecutive syndrome u need to learn to recpect people ok no need for it u ***


bit far adam mate some might take it as a joke but some might not no need for that tho any way when ur next update
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they **** me off

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ryangiggs11 said:
looking forward to ur next update
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nah m8 not doing no more up date am sick of people taking the **** out of me
 
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ok mate shame dont let idiots stop you mate we all got to start of some were
 
Nobody said it was boring as far as i can see,
it was just annoying that the word LOL featured about five times in every update is all :/
and you just need to go into more detail and it could be good.

and so what if we're taking the ****? it's a joke. stop taking everything so seriously ;)
 
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