Editors note - My previous attempt at writing this story went into too much detail and it was getting to the point where I was doing more story writing than actually playing which is never a good thing. I found the idea of this story quite intriguing hence why I'm trying to rewrite it. I'd appreciate some feedback, Thanks.
![thecaretakerpart1.png](http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3877/thecaretakerpart1.png)
![thecaretakerpart2.png](http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2093/thecaretakerpart2.png)