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Editors note - My previous attempt at writing this story went into too much detail and it was getting to the point where I was doing more story writing than actually playing which is never a good thing. I found the idea of this story quite intriguing hence why I'm trying to rewrite it. I'd appreciate some feedback, Thanks.


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This story is class so far mate. Really enjoyed the read even though i'm a Town fan haaha. Keep it up !!
 
Thanks for the feedback guys.

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Devastated!! My MAC crashed last week and after going to Apple I have lost everything on it. Now have to reinstall the game and obviously I no longer have this game, shame as I was really enjoying it too.

Thanks for reading.
 
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