The Caretaker

[bfcbub]

Editors note - My previous attempt at writing this story went into too much detail and it was getting to the point where I was doing more story writing than actually playing which is never a good thing. I found the idea of this story quite intriguing hence why I'm trying to rewrite it. I'd appreciate some feedback, Thanks.

 

[ollie56]

Great start. : ) Looks good

 

[dconway]

This story is class so far mate. Really enjoyed the read even though i'm a Town fan haaha. Keep it up !!

 

[bfcbub]

Thanks for the feedback guys.

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[justlikewatching brazil]

Great update mate, very different to a usual story. Good luck at Palace, i'm sure you'll do well there.

 

[celticmad]

when will the next update be

 

[bfcbub]

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[bfcbub]

Devastated!! My MAC crashed last week and after going to Apple I have lost everything on it. Now have to reinstall the game and obviously I no longer have this game, shame as I was really enjoying it too.

Thanks for reading.