The Kid from South Africa

[ollie56]

gripping.
Verrati=prat

 

[Alcaraz]

It seems that my performance against Middlesbrough Reserves had really disappointed the staff and coaches and sooner rather than later,I found myself getting fewer and fewer starts for the Reserves.

I had my birthday last week,and my present was knowing that I had not even made the squad for the game against the Fulham Reserves the following day.

I knew that I should be focusing on football but I could not get the conversation between Marco Verratti and Chris Hughton.What was the thing that Chris Hughton had given Veratti's father that made him feel so scared?

Update tommorow

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---------- Post added at 05:08 PM ---------- Previous post was yesterday at 11:53 PM ----------

News of the World has just released a video which has shocked the whole of the footballing community.There are likely to be several backlashes from all parts of the Globe.

The video was taken when an undercover News of the World reporter pretended to be a Bookmaker and met with Chris Hughton in a meeting.The rest will be shown in the video...


Video

A grainy picture shows a simple well dressed man which a voiced over the video describes as Italian Star Marco Veratt's father and he is seen clearly talking to Newcastle Manager Chris Hughton.

'Dont worry Franco,the job is completely real and you do have the qualifications to do it anyway so it will look like a pure coincidence'
Chris Hughton speaks in a clear audible tone

'I have my doubts Hughton,right when Marco transfers...someone will be on us for sure'
Franco says as a bead of sweat rolls down his forehead​

'Don't worry Franco,its a fantastic opportunity for your career along with Marco's and we are paying you a sizeable amount to lead a comfortable life.'

That statement seemed to have relaxed Franco who settled comfortably in the seat.

'Mr Chris, I do not want any trouble..All the amount now in cash and you make sure you are not seen n public again with me...You know how much FIFA has toughned its stance on this..this business since Gael Kakuta'

'You will have no problems Franco, just make sure Marco Veratti is in a right state of mind'

As the video finished,a few lines in text popped up

The News of the World has managed to uncover the a major fraud in the transfer of Marco Veratti from Pescara to Newcastle and has handed this video to Scotland Yard as evidence.​

 

[ollie56]

great update. Mint story.

 

[Alcaraz]

The world's eyes seemed to be on a Luxury five star hotel in Geneva Switzerland.Camera's flashed in its wide Auditorium as FIFA President Sepp Blatter walked onto stage.There was a certain pain in the way he walked as if every step towards whatever he was about to do hurt.​

'I have come here as it is my duty to read out a punishment for Newcastle FC. after a recent allegations against them by a Brithish Tabloid was found to be true.'
said Sepp Blatter as he wiped beads of sweat rolling down his forhead with the back of his hand​

'It has be found that certain members of the Newcastle Establishment tried to poach the up and coming star Marco Verratti by offering lucrative jobs and bonuses to his father Franco Verratti'​

'We have decided after extensive meetings with related personell to ban Mr Chris Hughton the primary man responsible for these detestable acts from working in Football for life'
said Sepp Blatter the anger very much evident in his voice​

'Although Marco Verratti has told us that he never wanted to go to Newcastle this way but was forced to do so by his father,rules are rules and he has been banned from participating in any competitive Football Match for 6 months'
said Sepp Blatter,however this time there was a certain sadness in his voice at banning such a potential star player for something he never did but was forced into.​

'After the Gael Kakuta incident,we sent out a strong message to every club to not engage in such activities,however our warning was not heeded and this is the result'
said Sepp Blatter shaking with anger​

'And who was the major victim,Marco Verratti a player I myself have marked as a future Italy Captian...I hope that all those involved are ashamed of themselves after they ruined not only their own lives but most importantly the live of one of Footballs rising stars!'
said Sepp Blatter shouting the last sentence​

And with that,he walked quickly off the stage to the flashes of numerous cameras and babbles of voices​

---------- Post added at 02:55 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:37 AM ----------

After weeks of silence,Marco Veratti a player recently banned unjustly as many say in a sensational announcement by FIFA President Sepp Blatter has agreed to do an exclusive intervie with our Sports Corresspondent John Wilshere where he has promised to reveal all the trauma's he had been suffering for the past 3 months.​

Excerpt of Interview​

Q1:Mr Veratti,how do you feel after this 'unjust' ban FIFA has imposed on you?​

A1:Obviously I feel angry and sad but I have matured,and I know life is tough so what can I say,I will continue to work hard and hopefully return a stronger player​

Q2:Mr Veratti,could you throw some light on the relationship between you and your father,Franco Veratti?​

A1:Ever since I was young,He always wanted me to be a footballer but over the past few years when I had become more of a known name across Italy,he pushed me to the limit that sometimes I used to have dark thoughts such as to run away...I always knew the deals he had with Mr Hughton and now as it has been revealed I find myself on the wrong end.​

Q3:Could you possible explain why your father decided to go ahead with this 'deal' when it had been publicly stated by Mr Sepp Blatter that he will not tolerate these things?​

A3:I don't know,maybe it was because he wanted me to become a better footballer and thus wanted me to play in a top English Club but i dont think this is true as many clubs in Italy and Spain were rumoured to be looking at me but only Newcastle was offering me anything and that is why he reject offers from AC Milan and Juventus without asking me and accepeted Newcastle's offer​

Q4:Just yestersay,FIFA released a statement that they will not allow you to play for Newcastle and that you will have to find yourself a new club,do you possibly think a club will still take a chance on you after this fiasco?​

Marco Veratti remains silent for a moment before answering​

A4:Why Not?,I am still the same player and person,you are forgetting that I got embroiled in this mess in the first place because of my father and other people,not because I was greedy​

Q5:Scotland Yard has decided to investigate all your Father's Business Dealings and assets,will you stand by your father and support him?​

A5:I know I will have to eventually,but right now I find it very tough to forgive him and I'm happy that they are investigating him,maybe he will get punished and come out a better person​

Q6:How do you intend to spend your six months away from Football?​

A6:Well,I was not going to release this but since I am not allowed to play any competitive matches,I have decided to play for English Club John Bull United in the Suffolk & Ipswich League Divison 2,I will be able to keep my match fitness and get regular practice this way​

---------- Post added at 03:02 AM ---------- Previous post was at 02:55 AM ----------

Newcastle given a 9 point deduction!​

Charles looked slowely up from the Newspaper Headlines that screamed at him from his free copy of the Daily Express.Already Newcastle were close to relegation from the Premiere Divison and this 9 point decution would pretty much seal Championship Football again next year.​

Moreover,the club still had not found a replacement manager for Mr Hugthon although there were intense speculation in the media,it seemed no manager wanted to take a chance on a club so close to relegation.​

Over the events of the past week,the eyes of the entire world had been on this club and this club once remembered for it s fanatical supporters and dedicated footballers had shrunk into a Corrupt Establishment which no one could change.​

Club Captain Nicky **** says he is ashamed that he plays for this club and says that this incident has left a black stain on the Glorius History of Newcastle United and has already announced his retirement come end of the season.​

'What now'
thought Charlie​

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[SPIDLY_MAN]

class so far

 

[Alcaraz]

The camera's positioned themselves as Football pundit John Dykes prepared to speak in his weekly show Football Forecast.He received a final touch of the make-up brush and he straightened his suit as the Studio Manager called 'Live in one,two and three'

'Hello and welcome to Football Forecast with me John Dykes'
said John Dykes with a wide,fake smile

'Todays breaking news is that Newcastle United a club which has been in the papers in the past few weeks for all the wrong reasons has suddenly experienced one of its worse injury crisis as utp 7 First-Team Players are said to be injured for 2-3 weeks'

The camera swung to Shebby Sing another Football Pundit who continued...

'John,this is really bad luck for Newcastle and I cant seem to see them in the Premiere Divison at all next year after their points deduction and still there is no manager'
said Shebby Singh cheerfully

'I agree Shebby,after this stroke of bad luck,Newcastle will be forced to play the bulk of their Reserve Team in the First-Team against the likes of Aston Villa,Chelsea and Sunderland in the last 3 matches of the season'

'Lets not forget John that Newcastle have also been fined an outstanding 30,000,000 pounds by FIFA and reports out of the club suggest that they may have to sell of their best players to cover this fine'

As Charles watched the tv intently in his agent,Mike's house where he was living while in England,Mike suddenly came and switched off the tv.

'Go to sleep Charles,you have practice tommorow'
said Mike quietly but firmly

At first Charles got irritated but then as he walked up to his bedroom,he realised that Mike once had played for Newcastle​

 

[CalumE5]

Great updates Alcaraz, loving the storyline, sounds like a real challenge for you if you take over as manager One thing though, to echo what others would said, a space goes a long way, try to remember to put spaces after commas and colons and other punctuation marks! This will make your story even better!

 

[Alcaraz]

Great updates Alcaraz, loving the storyline, sounds like a real challenge for you if you take over as manager One thing though, to echo what others would said, a space goes a long way, try to remember to put spaces after commas and colons and other punctuation marks! This will make your story even better!

lol I am not taking over as manager,this story only focuses on Charles..who is 17,there will be loads of twists and turns as I have already holidayed through his entire career which involves 4-6 clubs and I will be adding interesting side stories,for example in one of the clubs he went to when I holidayed his career,he did badly so I will think up a story on what made him do badly

 

[SPIDLY_MAN]

Update soon????

 

[Alcaraz]

Not 2 soon...Got exams will inform all followers when their is an update,sorry guys and I will defo continue this for FM11 albeit a similar but new story

 

[Vroteier9]

Man I just read this & I love it,I can't stop reading it. Excellent work.

 

[Alcaraz]

Thanks mate but sorry no updates for a while