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Disclaimer: Please be aware that this is a long read, and if you aren't a fan of reading in depth, then look away now. (Although this is the story section after all - think of this as an actual book). I'd appreciate the odd comment or two, or a 'like' so that I can guage the following. Thanks for taking the time to read.

It all starts in the penultimate game of last season: 5th May 2010.



From Borussia With Love

* * *

I - The Temple Of The Yellow Wall

'Some people think football is a matter of life and death. I can assure you, it's much more serious than that. If you are first you are first. If you are second you are nothing.'

The silenced room errupted with a roar of encouragement, the noise resonating throughout the corridor outside. There was a surge of excitement, heightened by adrenaline, as the players prepared to head out into the tunnel. They jostled for position behind their formidable captain, his purposeful stare a signal of focus and intent. He was not only their leader, but to many their idol, confirming his place amongst the club's elite. He said nothing. The exuberant manager had just quoted the late, great Bill Shankly, much to his player's ignorance. None had been alive during his legendary tenure at Liverpool, neither did they recognise his emotive words. Still, they understood the importance of today's match, and that of the following fixture. These two games would shape the future of this illustrious football club.


Led out by their experienced skipper, the squad approached the awaiting away side confidently. The passageway was dark and narrow, sunlight guiding them towards the only exit. The home crowd were in full voice, chanting relentlessly as was their tradition. Unbeknown to the hosts, this was one of the most intimidating venues in world football, with their fans amongst the most vocal in the division. The two captains stood beside one another, neither breaking focus to acknowledge his foe. There was a tense atmosphere, more so than in any other game this season, but the presence of their powerful leader seemed to comfort the younger players. He had missed the entire season through injury, but had returned at the most crucial of times. The stadium speakers exploded suddenly with vociferous song, continuing as the teams were announced and beckoned onto the field by an enthusiastic steward. This was it, time to stand up and be counted. Emerging from the tunnel, the captain glanced skyward towards the impressive mural depicted above, closing his eyes and kissing his ring finger as was his ritual.

'Ballspielverein Borussia Dortmund, Welcome to the Opera House of German Football,' read the daunting sign.

* * *

The crowd responded with a deafening drone of rapturous applause, saluting the return of their inspirational captain, Sebastian Kehl. He was astonished by their unwavering support, looking up at the expansive yellow wall encircling him and clapping in appreciation as he walked onto the pitch. The surface was immaculate, like a velvet, green carpet with its watery skin glistening under the early afternoon sun. The players quickly filtered into position as Kehl eyed up his counterpart, Wolfsburg hitman Zlatan Muslimovic, who had taken over the armband from the suspended Josue. Missing their influential midfielder and struggling to produce any kind of form, the visitors were expecting a tough contest. Dortmund were favourites to win, and comfortably. Wolfsburg however were a dangerous team, boasting the league's top goalscorer Edin Dzeko despite languishing in the lower reaches of the table after a cataclysmic season as title holders. Their championship defence had been interrupted by a european conquest that saw them fall at the quarter final hurdle against a plucky Fulham side, and as a consequence, their thread bare squad had dropped too many points in a grueling domestic campaign.

A yellow sea of over eighty thousand supporters packed into the Westfalenstadion, now officially going by the less enthralling corporate moniker of Signal Iduna Park after a much publicised, lucrative sponsorship deal. The effervescent atmosphere was incredible. Giant, golden flags littered the skies, so large in fact that two hands were needed to wield them. The ground trembled below the boisterous standing spectators in the South Stand as they errupted into life. The 'südtribüne', as they were affectionately known, numbered twenty-five thousand, and occupied the single largest free-standing grandstand of its kind in the whole of Europe. The mountainous block of yellow Dortmund shirts was broken by just one, a mysterious man dressed in black. The suited stranger was new to these parts and stood alone, unrecognisable to any that bordered him. Perhaps he was someone of importance? A club executive or footballing authority? Whoever he was, the majority of supporters chose to ignore him.

Amidst the cacophony, the lonely whistle of the referee was barely audible, and the Dortmund strike pairing of Nelson Valdez and Lucas Barrios had kicked off this enthralling contest. The hosts probably needed a victory if they were to harbor dreams of Champions League football next season. They were currently fifth in the table, just a point below both Werder Bremen and Bayer Leverkusen, and they signalled their intent with a vibrant early display. Sebastien Kehl controlled the midfield, dictating the tempo and dominating possession with his central partner Nuri Sahin. The home side's flair and speed were creating problems down both flanks, with Sahin at the heart of every attacking move, but goalscoring opportunities were few and far between. In form wide man, Kevin Grosskreutz, conjured up the first, a teasing cross from the right that just eluded the despairing Paraguayan Lucas Barrios. From the resulting corner, Hajnal tried his luck with a rasping long-range effort, but was denied by an outstretched Benaglio palm.

Wolfsburg showed glimpses of their counter attacking abilities, a welcome respite to their industrious defence, but failed to find the target as Weidenfeller watched on, untested. Sahin seemed in confident mood, moving the ball around on the slick surface with aplomb. He'd been the standout performer in the reverse encounter this season and was really developing into a fantastic footballer, emerging as the heartbeat of this young Borussia Dormund side. It was his silky footwork and delightful pass that finally broke the visitor's resistance, Grosskreutz receiving the ball before a reckless Pekaric challenge took his legs from beneath him. The referee's whistle was greeted with adulation by the elated Borussians, a penalty kick and rightly so. Tempers flaired as the furious Wolsburg players surrounded the official like a pack of wolves hunting it's prey, each taking turns to snap tauntingly at their target. But Felix Brych stayed strong, threatening his tormentors with disciplinary action.

With the situation appeased, an unnerving tension filled the ground. There was a deathly silence as Nuri Sahin prepared himself for the spot kick, burdened by the expectations of over seventy thousand spectators. With a sharp intake of breath, the twenty two year old stepped up confidently...

* * *

'He strikes it hard and low to Benaglio's right...oh what a save!!!' screamed the exaggerating sports commentator. 'An unbelievable reach by the Wolfsburg 'keeper to tip it round the post!' he continued.

There were murmurings of disapproval amongst the Dortmund support, only broken by a spatter of jeers from the away faithful. It was an average penalty at best, the first Sahin had missed this season, and at such an important juncture for the club. Their manager, Jurgen Klopp, turned away in disgust, his hands covering his face in an animated gesture. He prayed that this setback wouldn't curtail his team's momentum.

It appeared to have no such effect, as the hosts played their best football throughout the last ten minutes of the half. Valdez saw a header go close after phenominal perseverance from right back Patrick Owomoyela, while Hajnal saw his tantalising cross hooked off the line by Andrea Barzagli just minutes later. Valdez was again denied by the magnificent Benaglio as the home side continued to press and create openings, his beautiful, dipping effort expertly tipped over the crossbar. Wolfsburg were like a stunned boxer holding a foe at arms length, evasive and defensive with their backs to the wall. Roared on by their demanding supporters, Dortmund pushed forward mercilessly looking for the breakthrough as the visitors faced a barrage of attacks. Wave after wave of yellow shirts flooded into the opposition half, like an unforgiving tide crashing against a rocky cliff, but the resilient Wolsburg defence stood firm during a goalless first half.

The Borussians left the field to a generous applause. They had played some of their best attacking football to date and, but for the enigmatic form of Benaglio between the sticks, would ordinarily hold an unassailable lead.

'Sit down lads, grab yourself a drink,' Klopp instructed as the Dortmund players returned to their luxurious changing facilities.

'Settle down, grab a drink...sit down,' his assistant reiterated.

Kehl edged towards the treatment table immediately. He was obviously feeling some discomfort, trying his utmost to hide it from his distracted manager. He was unsuccessful.

'What's wrong Sebastien? Is everything okay?'

'Yes, I'll be fine,' he confirmed. 'I just need some light treatment. I'm not coming off.'

The groin strain that had kept him out for the best part of a month was beginning to burn, but the club captain was a stubborn man, refusing to show any sign of weakness, refusing to let his teammates down.

'Now, we're playing really well, but we've got to be more clinical. They've got a solid defence and a good 'keeper, he's kept them in the game, but just keep doing what you're doing and the goal will come,' Klopp instructed. 'Let's try to get the ball out wide earlier, Tamas and Kevin are destroying them down the wings. Anyone want to add anything?'

Sahin stood to apologise. 'I'm sorry lads, that penalty was awful, I don't kn...'

'Sit down Nuri,' Kehl interrupted, climbing from his perch on the physio table. 'It's not your fault.' He continued to stride down to the end of the changing room. 'They're going to come out hard in the second half, we've got to match them. We have to get a win today, no excuses!'

'Come on boys!' added Subotic as the eager players headed out for the second half, the noises of encouragement growing louder and louder.

'This is our last game at the Westfalenstadion, let's give the fans something to be proud of!'

* * *

The halftime scores were still filtering through as the Dortmund players stepped onto the pitch, announced via the unrelenting sound system in the stadium. Two were significant.

'Bayer Leverkusen nil, Hertha Berlin, one.'

There was a thunderous roar. Leverkusen were unexpectedly losing at home, and Dortmund would leapfrog them if results remained unchanged. Everyone switched off for a moment, ignoring the other irrevelant scores before the important game in Gelsenkirchen was broadcast.

'Schalke nil, Werder Bremen, nil.'

For some, supporting their bitter rivals was difficult, however necessary. A win for Schalke and a positive result here would see Borussia Dortmund steal third spot, with just one game left. The black and yellows would still need to find a goal in this decisive second period, but a Champions League birth was still within their grasp. A goal couldn't come soon enough for the home fans.

The sunshine restored it's beam as the contest commenced, with Dortmund now attacking their renowned South Stand. The hosts continued their dominance, but were lacking the creative edge that Sahin had previously provided. Dwelling on his first half penalty miss, he was a shadow of his former self, unable to break down the irrepressible Wolfsburg defence. The visitors had been limited to sporadic counter attacks in the early stages, but grew more confident as the game developed with Grafite their primary threat. On the hour, the Brazilian forward forced both Subotic, then Weidenfeller into defensive action following a superb solo run. Minutes later, he saw a great chance fly past the post as Wolfsburg started to gain momentum.

With the away side now in ascendancy and time rapidly subsiding, Dortmund's Champions League vision was beginning to diminish. It was surely only a matter of time before substitutions were made, with the likes of Dimitar Rangelov, Jacub Blaszczykowski and youngster Marco Stiepermann warming up on the sidelines. The captain looked over in dismay. He was a clear candidate for replacement, lacking fitness and struggling with the pace of the game. Momentarily distracted, Grafite skipped past the tiring Kehl, releasing Makoto Hasebe on the right with a precise pass. The Japanese international produced an early cross, driven low into space for the onrushing Edin Dzeko. The ball drifted through the legs of Subotic on the wet surface, entangling in the rangy striker's spindly legs just six yards from goal. He was facing the wrong direction, seemingly losing control but managed an inventive prod with his heel. Weidenfeller looked on dispairingly as the ball trickled into the net, unable to react with his feet planted to the ground. Wolfsburg had taken the lead thanks to an imaginative Dzeko goal and a rare error from Serbian stalwart Subotic, and the Dortmund fans were finally silenced. The goal had been coming.

Before long, the thriving crowd were in full voice once again, pulsating with energy and appealing for improvement from their team. Klopp made two changes. Jacub 'Kuba' Blaszczykowski replaced Grosskreutz, before Sebastien Kehl's number was up. His disappointment was clear for all to see, but he left the field graciously, applauding the fantastic support as he headed straight down the tunnel for treatment. Marco Stiepermann came on in his place, making his home debut after just one previous first team appearance. His introduction had forced a change of formation. With three orthadox forwards now on the pitch, Dortmund began to show more ambition. Barrios remained the focal target man, while Valdez and Stiepermann flanked him either side. The youngster showed his enthusiasm immediately, hassling the opposition and demanding the ball. Within six minutes, his endeavor was rewarded. Nelson Valdez received Hajnal's piercing through ball before cutting the ball back to the area's edge.

'Go on son!' screamed Dortmund's animated manager. 'Hit it!...hit it!'

Stiepermann took the pass in his stride, calmly stroking a precise left foot finish past the helpless Wolfsburg 'keeper and into the bottom corner. The nineteen year old had levelled for BVB, sending the home fans into raptures.

* * *

With their equaliser came renewed vigour, and the Dortmund crowd stirred up a cauldron of noise once more. Their heroes pressed for a winner in the intensifying heat as the inspired supporters urged them forward. Stiepermann was a constant threat, almost sending the Football Temple into a state of frenzy when he picked Barrios out with an incisive pass, but the Paraguayan poacher saw his swerving strike well parried by Benaglio. The final minutes of the game saw end-to-end action as both sides opted to attack, and Dortmund hearts were in mouths when the Wolfsburg captain raced through on goal following a swift counter. Misimovic smashed the ball into the roof of the net and there was a murmer of celebration from the visiting faithful, only overshadowed by the home fan's cheer as the assistant slowly raised his flag. With time ebbing away, the hosts mounted an all-out attack and, in the final minute of the match, had one last chance to score the winner. Nelson Valdez received a neat Sahin pass, turning in an instant and firing a snap shot towards goal, only to be denied by the impenetrable Wolfsburg stopper. Benaglio was simply brilliant.

Hummels hoisted a long ball forward in desperation, and the final whistle inevitably blew. A disappointing draw, but would that be enough? The players performed a lap of honour, saluting their loyal fans and gesturing in approval, like a jester appealing to an unimpressed king. They stood nervously awaiting the Bundesliga final scores...

'And the results from elsewhere are as follows,' the rumbling sound emerged throughout the Westfalenstadion.

There was an agonising pause between each one as the growing tension became insufferable. The stadium announcer's monotonous drone gathered pace as he cycled through the outcomes, searching for the most significant. The horde of supporters waited, impatient as the wind, yet as silent as the sheeted dead. All the fruits of their labour could soon be undone.

'Bayer Leverkusen one,' everyone's ears suddenly pricked in interest, hound-like as if awoken by the slightest sound. 'Hertha BSC, one,' continued the voice.

Relief flooded the stadium. They hadn't lost any ground thus far, with the game in Gelsenkirchen still playing. The crowds were restless, agitated through both excitement and nervousness. The wait seemed like a lifetime, before news spread like wildfire that the contest was over.

'Schalke nil...Werder Bremen, two,' the speakers revealed in disappointment.

And that was it, the end of a Champions League dream with one crushing blow. Qualification would now be impossible, but for a Dortmund win, a Bremen loss and a mammouth seventeen goal swing in the final round of matches this season. The Westfalenstadion suddenly felt flat, it's atmosphere drained from within, and the Temple of the Yellow Wall would remain dormant for another summer.

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Simply Brilliant.

Very good OP, look forward to reading the rest.

*subscribes*
 
Great start. Big expectations considering how long you have been working on this :)
 
Brilliant start to this. Dare I say it's the best introduction I've read on here? I enjoy reading something of that length, so you can take your time updating if it's as good as that! Hopefully it can continue as well as it has started :)
 
This is absolutely incredible work here man! I cant believe you can write so much on a football manager game lol! KIU!
 
That is the best OP I have ever read.

Wow.
 
Amazing. I have suscribed defo be following this. Good luck.
 
Very, very good start. Huge potential in this. Subscribed.
 
Thanks for all the support guys, I'm really surprised at how well it has been received considering the length! The next chapter is coming along nicely, and will probably be posted at the start of next week, if not sooner. I plan to update on a weekly basis with each chapter of a similar length to the first.

@kris - To be honest, I have barely written anything since the 5th november. I have found it very difficult to pull myself away from FM!

Thanks to all for the welcome comments, and I hope you can continue to follow :D

---------- Post added at 08:13 PM ---------- Previous post was yesterday at 09:50 PM ----------

From Borussia With Love

***

II - The Slumberous Musings

Klopp was in sombre mood as he climbed out of his new car, the torrential rain ironically reflecting his anguish. His Seat Leon, with it's sharp curves and provocative design, stood alone on the expansive concrete by his workplace, like a protruding rock in a flooded plain. The downpour was unlike any that he'd seen during his Dortmund tenure, and unsurprisingly, the manager was the first to arrive at the club's deserted training grounds. The sudden change in the weather over the past twelve hours couldn't have been more exaggerated. He skipped hurriedly across the wet surface, ankles submerged as the water soaked into his stylish suit; he'd stubbornly ignored the need for waterproof attire this morning.

On entry, Klopp immediately headed for his office, breaking his foul mood momentarily to greet the solitary security officer as he passed. It was incredibly early, just six fifteen, but the guard had long since become accustomed to his primordial starts. The head coach would spend hours pouring over scout reports and documentation, priding himself on his astuteness in the transfer market. Today was no exception. Top of his agenda was a player he'd watched himself just a handful of times, Dinamo Bucharest's Gabriel Torje. The diminutive winger had been closely monitored throughout the season by Dortmund's vast scouting team, receiving accolades aplenty and enjoying a growing reputation, with media suggestions of interest from many top Serie A clubs. The Romanian's dribbling skills were most impressive, like a stream meandering down a rocky incline he would twist and turn, weaving between any obstacles in his path. He was clearly a talented youngster, and after much deliberation, was added to Klopp's burgeoning list of potential targets. For hours Klopp continued through the countless reports, all relative unknowns in the world of football, before a welcome interruption came his way,

'Knock, knock,' enquired an uncompromising voice as knuckles rapped against the solid oak door.

'Come in Michael,' the manager second guessed. 'You're in early today.'

Michael Zorc was the club's director of sports, and a great friend of Jurgen Klopp. During a seventeen year Borrussia Dortmund career, he'd amassed over four hundred appearances, netting well over one hundred times. He was rightly afforded legendary status by the club's passionate fans.

'Good morning Jurgen, how are we today? I have a favour to ask of you,' he requested casually, without leaving Klopp any time to respond. 'I have arranged a board meeting for this evening. I know it's late notice, but we'd like you to attend.'

'Of course, no problem,' the manager agreed as he rose from his chair to embrace his pal. 'What's on the cards today then?'

'It's just an end-of-season review really, nothing much. I know there's one game left but the board want to start planning for next season immediately. I'm sure there will be some discussion reguarding finances too, but I can't guarantee that there will be time to talk at great length.'

There was a sudden, loud buzzing as Klopp reached for his vibrating pocket, his mobile phone still a disruption despite it's silent setting.

'I'll let you get on then,' Zorc remarked as he turned towards the door. 'See you later.'

* * *

Klopp wore a beaming smile as he made haste down the corridor, a flagrant reversal of his previous melancholy state. Phone conversations with his agent had become commonplace - monotonous daily events that served neither purpose nor amusement. Today's however, was different. His representative, Marc Kosicke, had negotiated a generous television deal, an offer that the Dortmund manager could scarcely believe. Such proposals usually warranted rejection, with up to ten well-paid broadcasting jobs assuming this fate every month, but this one was special. He would return to the screen with renowned host Günther Jauch, providing invaluable match analysis and punditry during the upcoming World Cup finals. Klopp was going to South Africa!

He could barely hide his excitement as he paced towards the gym's double doors, forcing through with both arms in exaggerated fashion to boldly announce his arrival. Almost everyone turned around, easily distracted from their tedious routine for just a moment, before unwillingly returning to the task at hand. It was extremely humid, windows obscured with condensation, sweat pouring and muscles burning. There was a gentle rumble of continual noise, sporadically broken by a particularly loud grunt or the clanging of iron against iron, almost like that of an old factory in times past. The room was a hub of activity at almost half capacity, with the majority of first team players favouring a day of rest after the difficult draw yesterday afternoon. Typically, Sebastian Kehl was hard at work, desperate to regain his fitness in time for the final league match next week.

'Seba, you shouldn't be overworking that groin,' Klopp cried in disbelief. 'Go and see Peter, he'll sort you out with your recovery treatment.'

'That's the last place I want to be!' he retorted. 'I'm doing fine on my own, I don't need any more treatment. I just want to get back to playing football again.'

It was refreshing to see such an attitude, but Kehl's stubborness could easily be his own downfall. It was vital that he allowed his body sufficient recovery time after such a long period of injury, he'd missed almost an entire season after all.

'I'm sorry, but you're just not ready. You're legs can't heal as quickly as they used to, and there's no point in taking any chances at this stage of the season,' the manager implored. 'Go and get a massage. The rest of the squad will be leaving shortly anyway, we can't train properly because of the weather, so it's just a light weights session today.'

Kehl reluctantly dragged his tiring frame away from the leg press, leaving the room in sullen mood like an upset child dismissed by an overbearing parent. He headed straight for the physio room as directed, knocking on entry. It was an elaborate setup, brilliantly white with immaculate, modern equipment following a recent refurbishment. There was a heavenly linger in the air, an amalgamation of ointment, liniment and oils, but the dreamy aromas only acted as a screen for his pain. For the Dortmund captain, it was like walking into a neverending nightmare, his own personal battle for fitness. It was the last place Kehl wanted to be...the smell was almost nauseating...

'Ah, Sebastian! We've been expecting you,' Peter Kuhnt greeted. He was the club's chief physio, having joined Dortmund sixteen years ago, and was one of the most skilled therapists in the country. His naturally calming influence was coupled with an authoritative presence, while his motivational techniques were second to none. Kuhnt was a firm favourite amongst the players, although Kehl would often give him a hard time.

'I'm sure you're feeling pretty tired today. Is your groin feeling tight this morning?' he asked.

'What do you think?' Kehl snapped. 'Of course it is!'

Breaking his usual professionalism, Peter allowed himself a childish smirk as he averted Kehl's eyeline, before turning back to respond.

'Don't worry, you'll be back to your best in no time.'

* * *

Kehl's morning had passed with unforseen haste as he relaxed at the capable hands of the club's masseuse. His mood had finally improved, and the Dortmund captain departed in higher spirit than ever before. The final league game next week was an unrealistic target, but with a full summer of preparation, a more productive campaign was becoming a real possibility next year. Had his injury demons finally been conquered?

Appreciative of the physio team's endeavour, Kehl shook Peter's hand as he left. They always did their utmost to help him, and he wasn't always so forthcoming with his gratitude.

'Thank you Peter, I really mean it. I know I can be a-...'

'Don't worry, Sebastian, I know you're just frustrated. You're one of the good guys,' the head physio intervened. 'Come and see me tomorrow, after training, and we will continue with your treatment.'

The veteran nodded in agreement, smiling as he brushed past and slipped through the door. The training complex was abandoned but for the presence of the enterprising Dortmund manager, who continued his meticulous study of the club's scout reports. Klopp had identified a further two transfer targets, both young talents that the German giants could nurture and develop; both seemed destined for bright futures within the game. With his summer shopping list nearing completion, the Dortmund boss glanced at his watch. Twelve thirty five, time to leave. He'd been offered a ticket to the Second Division contest between St. Pauli and Paderborn, an important match for the Hamburg based side who were pushing hard for promotion. Amongst their ranks, the hosts boasted one of the brightest youth prospects in the country, a former Leverkusen forward recently described as the next Sebastian Deisler. Klopp was eager to observe the starlet, Deniz Naki, in action. The journey would be tediously long, a four hour round trip, but this would be his only opportunity with a hectic summer now in the offing. The relentless rain continued to fall, but Klopp's new found mood would not be dampened. The weather extremities would not affect the impeccable public transport systems in place in Germany, although the manager wasn't looking forward to braving the deluge.

Kehl met Klopp in the hallway unexpectedly as the pair made their way to the exit. They spoke briefly of Kehl's treatment before halting abrubtly at the sea of wading journalists outside. The harsh downpour drowned out the buzz of questions as the Dortmund duo pushed past, weaving and ducking beneath the throng of umbrellas. The media trail snaked intermittently towards the car park entrance, finishing with a large group surrounding the Dortmund manager's Seat Leon as he forced through and clambered inside. What was all this commotion in aid of? Klopp cracked his window slightly in an attempt to satisfy his intrigue.

'Have you accepted any bids for Subotic?' screamed one persistent journalist.

'Is Nevan heading to Manchester? How much is the deal? What about London?' questioned another.

The Dortmund boss peered out in amazement, shocked and confused. He'd not heard anything official, but hadn't seen as much interest in a transfer rumour since his first season at the club. A whirlwind of frenzy had surrounded the Merseyside moves of both Steven Pienaar and Phillip Degen two years ago, and the similarities here were evident.

'The club will release an official statement in the near future,' Klopp responded professionally as he raced away from the horde. 'I don't want to see Nevan leave Borussia Dortmund.'

As he sped clear, thoughts began to race through his mind, thoughts of betrayal and disloyalty. Had the board gone behind his back and sold Subotic?

* * *

The train journey to Hamburg was emmotionally uncomfortable as Klopp began to question his position as manager. The board of directors had been fantastic during his two year tenure, always discussing every transfer at great depth, eventually allowing Klopp the deciding vote. But had this all changed today? The young Borussia Dortmund squad was developing nicely, and would surely again push for a Champions League berth next season. It was imperative that they didn't lose any of their core players; the likes of Subotic, Hummels and Sahin were invaluable, but would inevitably receive some interest following impressive individual performances this year.

Klopp tried to put this afternoon's events to the back of his mind, focussing on the scouting mission that he was about to undertake. He struggled, wrestling his natural temptation to call his close friend Michael Zorc and ascertain the truth behind the stories. Then he thought about Subotic. Had he been contacted? Did he know what was going on? The pull of a Premiership club was strong, widely considered the best league in which to ply one's trade. But who's to say he'd want to leave? The pair had forged a strong relationship, and Klopp had watched and developed Subotic's considerable talent since their early days at Mainz. He'd brought Subotic with him to Dortmund after all. The manager convinced himself that there was no reason for concern, sliding deeper into his seat and succumbing to the overwhelming comforts of the business class coach. He started to drift into a light sleep.

Klopp dreamed of momentous, elaborate celebrations and a spectacular parade. He dreamed of hoisting the country's Bundesliga trophy high above his head, fans cheering and dancing with joy while his jubilant players were met with euphoric exaltation. He dreamed of domestic success. He yearned for it. He wanted adulation and heroic status unlike any before him. Klopp dreamed of taking the German national team to great heights, with medals and trophies in abundance. He envisaged a World Cup Final showdown with arch-enemies England, a contest that saw him pit his wits against the mighty Capello and tactically outclass him. He had become a footballing icon, the greatest German manager to ever grace the game...

Klopp awoke to a ripple of thunder as the train slowed on entrance to the Hauptbahnhof Central Station in Hamburg. It was the second most used in Europe, and the manager was mesmerised by the flurry of activity surrounding him as he regained consciousness. He was still reflecting upon his slumberous musings, now considering his Champions League footballing ambitions. He'd imagined rubbing shoulders with the best managers in Europe before, very recently in actual fact, but those dreams were prematurely crushed just twenty four hours ago. He quickly snapped out of his momentary daydream and departed for the match, already ten minutes late.

Zorc, meanwhile, had just arrived at the Westfallonstadion in preparation for the board meeting. The rain teemed over him like a flash flood cast down from the heavens, yet he couldn't resist a walk out into the centre of the magnificent pitch. Like the weather, his playing memories came flooding back as he glanced skyward at the colossal grandstand and it's vibrant colourings. He was proud to a part of this huge club's rich history. When empty, the ground was strangely peaceful and a great place in which to gather one's thoughts or clear one's head. Zorc considered himself a man of high moral standing, but was hiding a secret that he feared would soon emerge. It was tearing him apart. He'd hoped the rain would cleanse his soul and somehow rid him of the guilt.

* * *

Klopp settled into his seat amongst the St. Pauli supporters with surprising anonymity, with almost fifteen minutes of the game elapsed. It was rare for him to remain so inconspicuous in such a public place, but this unusual blessing would at least allow him to conduct his business most thoroughly. Naki was playing in attack alongside veteran journeyman Marius Ebbers, and would surely fancy himself against a struggling Paderborn defence that had leaked goals all season long. The Dortmund manager found himself somewhat excited by the prospect of the contest, like a child watching his first ever live game, even joining in with the more easily learned chants.

The St. Pauli pair caused the visitors a number of problems in the early stages, although the aging Ebbers seemed to outshine his striking apprentice. Naki's pace was a constant threat, but he wasted many presentable opportunities with wasteful contol and finishing. The pressure was beginning to tell though, and a dangerous corner from Charles Takyi saw the hosts take a deserved lead. The ball flashed across the six yard box with the Paderborn 'keeper flapping, and the towering Ebbers steamed through the crowded box like a train, smashing the cross home with a powerful far post header.

Following the opener, the energy appeared to drift from the game, with St. Pauli seemingly content to sit on their lead. The remaining twenty five minutes stuttered into insignificance as Naki was moved onto the right side of midfield, a position that he had played for the majority of the season. St. Pauli were comfortable, without ambition to extend their lead, but as the half drew to a close, the visitors managed a surprise equaliser. A poor challenge from Naki on the edge of the area resulted in a swerving Bruckner effort that completely deceived the home side's goalkeeper, whistling into the net from twenty five yards out.

The second half was much like the first, St. Pauli clearly hoping to avoid defeat rather than push for a winner. Naki was withdrawn just beyond the hour mark after a relatively poor display. Klopp had received glowing feedback from his scouting team throughout the season, but the trecharous weather conditions really seemed to affect his game. Naki's ability to cover a number of positions worked in his favour however, and he certainly had the raw talent to succeed in the top flight. It would be a difficult decision that the Dortmund manager had to make, and one that he would consider during his train journey home. Would an approach for Deniz Naki be good business for Borussia Dortmund?

There was little else for Klopp to contemplate for the remainder of the match, with very few players of potential remaining on the field. The visiting Paderborn side had upped their game and were pressing for a winner when Klopp felt his pocket vibrate violently; another incoming call. He examined the screen diligently, confused at the highlighted name: Norbert Dickel.

Dickel was Dortmund's chief scout, and a remarkable servent to the club. His most memorable moment as a player was undoubtedly the winning goal in the DFB Pokal Cup final of nineteen eighty-nine, bringing Dortmund their first silverware for over twenty years. He was a very insightful man with a broad knowledge of the club that he loved. klopp answered the unexpected call apprehensively.

'Norbert? Is everything okay?' he asked. There was an eerie silence, like the lull after a storm as the manager awaited a response. There was clearly a poor signal and a slight break in communication, Dickel and Klopp were situated on opposite sides of the World after all.

'Jurgen. I think I've found you a star...'

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Phenomenal update. This could well be the best FM Story out there atm.
 
Phenomenal update. This could well be the best FM Story out there atm.

I very much doubt that, but thanks for the kind words. Yours is my favourite at the minute but I'm sure Kris will have a huge following once his gets going. The updates will probably be quite slow because my workload increases over christmas, but I hope anyone following will be patient and continue to do so. I will try to update by the end of the week (A)

Thanks for all the comments guys
 
Utterly phenomenal, best story out there by a mile, just read this and thought i was reading a book from a possessional author, cant wait for the next update.
 
Wow, that was, once again, breath taking.

And I 100% agree with Eds. It is by far, the best on the site.
 
great but very boring to read mate, try get pics or something. but very good story luv it!
 
great but very boring to read mate, try get pics or something. but very good story luv it!

Have you ever read a book without pictures?

Take no notice of him fuelledbypassion, it's easily exciting enough. Not read the current update fully yet but I will when I've got time.
 
great but very boring to read mate, try get pics or something. but very good story luv it!

Shows the mentallity of your books XD Pictures are acceptable in certain storys when the writing isn't as intense and an actual story yes if he was just writing about his games then Yes I would agree with pictures however this isn't one of those storys mate.

well done again on the update, wasn't going to post but I had to comment on that post lol.
 
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