DONT quit mate. Ive just read this all, and its brilliant. The thing is, when people see how much you update your story and how many pages there are, more people will follow... It just takes time....I'ts a fantastic story and something new..It would be such a shame to throw this away.
Thanks alot mate, I'll take your advice and keep it going & see how it goes. I'll put up another post soon, just going to work on it just now!