No, just saying that your story sounds very unreliable. Firstly you have no proper source. Secondly you claim that United beat literally every major club in the world to the signing of Kroos and somehow did it before the transfer window even began. Your justification for this was the Moyes was seen with Kroos agent despite the fact that managers are seen with agents all the time and it hardly ever means much. Then you go on to claim that after all this hard work, you rejected one of the best if not the best young player in the world because a manager didn't want him despite the fact that 99% of managers would love to have a player of Kroos talent in their team
He's hardly best young player in the world... he's a good player but honestly nothing more yet.
LVG doesn't care about names or reputations, he wants players who can work with and who fit into his system. Ander Herrera offers things Kroos doesn't, high-energy, aggression and surpisingly good at tackling. Just to name a few.
I didn't quote a source, I quoted Moyes who had them quotes put over a variety of sources so we can say they are accurate. A lot of the ground-work was done before anyone else probably realised he was unhappy with his contract situation.
Lets move on now, Kroos is gone and past, so we believe.