Steve*
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Nice story mate, It is well written so keep up the good work.
I just have 2 suggestions for you to stew over...
1. I would lower the amount of images slightly. Theres no need for images of the stadium after most matches. Images are best used sparingly for more effect.
2. When using quotations or talking text maybe put it in italics to make it stand out more.
Will pop in from time to time
I just have 2 suggestions for you to stew over...
1. I would lower the amount of images slightly. Theres no need for images of the stadium after most matches. Images are best used sparingly for more effect.
2. When using quotations or talking text maybe put it in italics to make it stand out more.
Will pop in from time to time
