It looks like you are doing ok in your tactic test? i leave team talks to assistant (steve round). he doing ok but not renewing his contract i dont think. i put a screenshot of my team training up did you use that? helps get best out of players. also make sure you have 2 teams of almost equally good players if you can to rotate, with some good youngsters under them incase of injury.
Hope that helps.
I know, it just didn't do aswell as you did with it, but nonetheless its still a high scoring tactic. I think the difference was i didn't set up the individual training which may have helped. Im done testing this one, and keeping it in my bank as it did well. onto some other tactics now!